Wednesday, 5 October 2016

Baby I Can Tell

BABY I CAN TELL 
©Trev Teasdel Cleobury Mortimer September 1966 

I can tell that you are slipping away from me
By the faraway look in your eyes
and your superficial sighs.

Chorus
Baby I can tell - yeah
Baby I can tell – yeah
Baby now I see.
Baby I can tell – yeah

There's no use in trying to conceal your guilt
You're trying to demolish this whole world I've built.
Better admit now the wine is spilt.

I'm in a state of rejection
I've discovered a loose connection
Won't you open up your eyes
to a wise compromise.
...............


Baby I Can Tell - YouTube 2025 by Mira and the magnetic Ghosts



Same version but on Reverbnation 



This was the first lyric I wrote - back in September 1966 - I was 15 and away at boarding school in Cleobury Mortimer. I bought the Record Song Book - a magazine of the time with all the lyrics of the chart hits. That Saturday, I viewed the lyrics to With a Girl Like You by the Troggs - loved the Troggs but every other line was a Baba baa baa bah - next to it was the beautiful Paul Simon lyric Dangling Conversation - pure poetry with layered meaning images. I figured I have a go at writing a lyric - in the next room someone had Radio Caroline on - the Walker Brothers hit 'Baby, You Don't Have to Tell Me was playing - I took my que from that for the title Baby I Can Tell ( a paraphrase, and maybe pinched 'Superficial sighs' from Paul Simon. It was just an experiment to see if I could write a lyric - but of course I didn't stop there. This lyric got shelved - kept just to remind me of the starting point. I had the basic tune in my head but never put it to music - using AI recently I created a track for the lyric to see how it would sound, sung and played.

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